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burtsun

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This is the very first post of mine here. Thank you for viewing.
 

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Hmmm, not really sure what to think of the compo. Not my thing. I would rather have focussed on the flower on the bothom.
 
Welcome! Composition is lacking.. too much black dead space, no emphasis on subject. Lighting is harsh.. flower has a bad shadow across the top.
 
I think you were going for the water drop from the upper leaf to the flower. I like the idea. It would be awesome with the drop ready to fall to the lower flower.
 

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