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Discussion in 'Macro Photography' started by burtsun, Mar 27, 2012.

  1. burtsun

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    This is the very first post of mine here. Thank you for viewing.


     

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    Hmmm, not really sure what to think of the compo. Not my thing. I would rather have focussed on the flower on the bothom.
     
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    Welcome! Composition is lacking.. too much black dead space, no emphasis on subject. Lighting is harsh.. flower has a bad shadow across the top.
     
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    I think you were going for the water drop from the upper leaf to the flower. I like the idea. It would be awesome with the drop ready to fall to the lower flower.
     

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