New photos C&C Please :)

[Postman158]

Have a couple new photos that I personally like.. but as I've come to notice as a complete NOOB, your seasoned eyes see more than my eyes

Enjoy!

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2. I had a reflector for this shoot, which definitely helped.


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5. I love Rubik's Cubes. I have probably more than 10 different cubes lying around... So I figured one of them wouldn't mind its picture taken.


Thanks in advance!

 

[NayLoMo6C]

1) u shuld crop the pepper shaker of the left out

2) the gaps between the wooden planks on the left are distractions

3) girls toes are cut off of the frame

4) um, dont rly get the meaning behind this one

5) again u clipped out part of the subject

as a supposed noob, these rnt too bad. Keep shooting

 

[Postman158]

Thanks! I really appreciate it! See, those are things I may have thought didn't matter, or looked "okay", but now it gives me something else to be cognizant about. Thanks again.

 

[burdock87]

1) Hmm... I think it's neat.
2) I agree with the first critique; the spaces in the planks draw the eye away from the model, and toward the background
3) I think the model on the right is too close to the edge. Too much crop?
4) Maybe too much shadow on the model's face? The second model in the back draws the eye away from the first model.
5) Either crop more of the Rubik's cube, or put the whole thing in the picture.

Overall, they're good shots. Keep shooting to get better! ^.^

 

[Postman158]

1) Hmm... I think it's neat.
2) I agree with the first critique; the spaces in the planks draw the eye away from the model, and toward the background
3) I think the model on the right is too close to the edge. Too much crop?
4) Maybe too much shadow on the model's face? The second model in the back draws the eye away from the first model.
5) Either crop more of the Rubik's cube, or put the whole thing in the picture.

Overall, they're good shots. Keep shooting to get better! ^.^

Sounds good, thanks so much!