New Series C&C please

[shortpballer]

All Pictures taken with my Hasselblad 100mm f/2.2 with the exception of the first and 4th image which were taken witha 35mm. Images meant to be viewed in order presented.

 

[MrsLittle]

Interesting story being told here.

 

[shortpballer]

Thank You Hopefully it was a little more successful than the last series I put on here trying to tell a story.

 

[ronjohn]

Cool story. My favorite image is the 3rd and 4th ones.

 

[bazooka]

I like storytelling in images, but the last one could stand alone... I very much like it.

To be honest, I think #2 is a little weak and think you could have done better judging from the other images. I think the red light is a little too saturated and he's also getting lost in the shadow on the right.

It's apparent you put plenty of though and work into this, well done.

 

[Alpha]

Overall I think it's ok but kind of haphazard.

#1 is a little Terry Richardson and doesn't quit jive with the colors of the other images.
#2 I like the wardrobe and the model but I think the set is overdone. The wine bottles are too conspicuous to be believable.
#'s 3-5 don't do much for me.

 

[GeorgieGirl]

Fan of #4 and #5 here. :thumbup:

Can I borrow your camera to see if I really want a Canon Mark 5...version whatever?

 

[shortpballer]

Fan of #4 and #5 here. :thumbup:

Can I borrow your camera to see if I really want a Canon Mark 5...version whatever?

Canon Mark 5? If you mean 5D mark i or ii, my camera is completely different, its slow and is almost useless over 200 iso...

 

[GeorgieGirl]

But the results are wonderful. A treat for me to see.

 

[fjrabon]

I like them overall, like others have said, I think the feel of the first one is a little inconsistent with the rest of the series.

 

[DiskoJoe]

Fan of #4 and #5 here. :thumbup:

Can I borrow your camera to see if I really want a Canon Mark 5...version whatever?

hahaa, The guy is using a HASSELBLAD and not a canon. The difference is like Venus versus Mars. Completely different worlds.

 

[cyngus]

great lighting and concept well done!

 

[GeorgieGirl]

hahaa, The guy is using a HASSELBLAD and not a canon. The difference is like Venus versus Mars. Completely different worlds.

That exactly what I was saying.

 

[Iron Flatline]

I don't have comments on individual images because as a narrative piece they must judged together... and I think you've done a very good job. The red light gives it a certain bloodied edge.

From a story perspective it's a little maudlin, but the emo-boy in me loves that