New shot of the girlfriend.

[azntaiji]

C/C welcome! I am aware of the red light leak on her left side, I didn't catch that until after I uploaded . Thought I erased it all off her clothes from that layer.


Megan and the Sunset. by azntaiji, on Flickr

 

[rexbobcat]

The lighting looks good. I'm not sure about her pose, however. With you elbow sticking out like that it makes the composition seem a little tight.

There is also a grey thing coming right out of the top of her head. It's not too distracting, because of the shallow DoF, but it's still noticeable.

 

[azntaiji]

Thanks! I had a few shots of her in the same pose farther away, but this one had the most clarity. Agree with the grey thing, I think it was a bike in the background.

 

[PinkDoor]

Her face/color looks perfect though! I love the warmth and and I think the focus is spot on!

 

[azntaiji]

Her face/color looks perfect though! I love the warmth and and I think the focus is spot on!

Thanks!

 

[PhotoBrody]

Looks very nice! What did you shoot with?

 

[Sw1tchFX]

Red light leak? So what film did you use?

 

[PhotoBrody]

Red light leak? So what film did you use?

^^^ lol

 

[tmjjk]

If I would have posted this image they would have killed me on the background being blown out... I will never figure this out lol. Anyways the girl is beautiful and I think it is a beautiful image as well. My only issue is the tight framing... I think her elbow and right arm should be fully included.

 

[PhotoBrody]

If I would have posted this image they would have killed me on the background being blown out... I will never figure this out lol. Anyways the girl is beautiful and I think it is a beautiful image as well. My only issue is the tight framing... I think her elbow and right arm should be fully included.

Noo, just remember- big difference on "blown out" and a "bokeh effect." blown out usually refers to color and lighting. This particular image has a great bokeh effect, (blurred backgroubd) meaning his aperture is wide open. But I do agree with the framing..it's ok though, I've cut body parts out also.

 

[PhotoBrody]

This almost reminds me of a Carl Zeiss lens..

 

[Hobbytog]

Good use of Dof. Lovely smile. Lovely model. Clone some of the left side BG to the right where it is burnt out.

 

[Sw1tchFX]

I think it's hilarious how people are concerned about how the background is a little blown..talk about missing the forest for the trees

 

[jwbryson1]

I like the image but the crop is way too tight for me.

 

[The_Traveler]

bad pose, bad pose and bad pose.