New shot of the girlfriend.

[Jaemie]

Thanks! I had a few shots of her in the same pose farther away, but this one had the most clarity. Agree with the grey thing, I think it was a bike in the background.

I think the "grey thing" referred to is the grey pole shooting up vertically above her head. I'd reference it visually, but your photo is not "okay to edit."

Your girlfriend is beautiful(!) and her face is captured wonderfully in this photo. I don't like the hand-on-hip; it looks posed and impatient, uncomfortable. The left arm should be included in the frame, as well. Wonderful background blurring.

 

[ambaker]

I like the lighting, and the bokeh. As already mentioned the crop is a little tight. The other thing I would mention is she looks stiff, maybe a little nervous or self conscious. She is smiling, but it doesn't look like a, "I'm having a good time", smile.

Once she relaxes in front of the camera, she will make a very good model.