NFL Jets C&C please

[iNick]

Just started shooting in RAW and im still a noob. I don't know much about editing but im using PP and was curious if im on the right track with these. Thanks guys :thumbup:
BTW i know the guy standing in the shot on #2 is distracting, but im not skilled in PP yet to know how to take him out haha:er:

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[DerekSalem]

Nice looking pictures. Was there some type of event that let people down at field level?

I'd help out with removing the guy in picture #2 but a going away party is about to start at my house and I'm on my Mac Mini...so don't really have time to do it at the moment. It should be super easy though since it's completely out of focus already

 

[daarksun]

Image one lacks any composition as Tomlinson seems to be the images main focus but part of his left side is missing and there is nothing in all that wasted space to the right of the player.

I am not sure image 2 is worthy of the work to remove the guy in the background. it's still just an image of a player from the back. It would be good practice doing the removal but it's not going to make that particular image a great shot.

Image 3 I like a lot. Nice detail, colors, lighting and composition.

 

[Heck]

#1 his arm is cut off and hes too far to the left in the frame. #2 you can crop the dude out but the player is just slightly soft out of focus. The last is the best of the 3. Congrats on stepping up to Raw. It was a big move forward for me when I did it.

 

[AprilEye]

I like the first one the best and the kid on the sidelines adds to the story of the photo.

 

[iNick]

thanks for the comments guys, these were taken during pre-game warm ups and i was trying to leave as many of the extra or non players out of the shots, thats why the compositions are a bit strange. Im focusing more on the colors and quality of the pictures since i was editing the raw images. thanks again! :thumbup: