Ngorogoro, Serengeti, Tarangire Safari Photos

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Impressive.
And the zebra group pic sure makes obvious that these are animals in the wild. The zoo will still need to be built that could keep such a huge herd of zebras.

I really like that zebra crossing photo! :D

And the close-up of the elephant caked in mud. Super focus on the eye-lashes (and mud).
 
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Impressive.
And the zebra group pic sure makes obvious that these are animals in the wild. The zoo will still need to be built that could keep such a huge herd of zebras.

I really like that zebra crossing photo! :D

And the close-up of the elephant caked in mud. Super focus on the eye-lashes (and mud).

Thanks!!

Yeah, i think these are my best set of photos yet... I'm still 18 so only going to get better! I thought when i saw the zebras crossing the road, 'woah zebra crossing' so took the pic and it came out well ahah! I love my close up of the elephant eyelashes too :D
 

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Very cool! I envy your experience in Africa. Its definitely on my list.

I like the heard shot the best. That crooked skyline is hard to miss though.... :sexywink:
 

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These are great! A bit of constructive criticism:

1 - it looks unfortunately like you've focussed just in front of the monkey, would be a nice shot otherwise.

2 - as has been pointed out, the horizon needs fixing. If I were you, I'd just clone over the blue to avoid loss of resolution. It's a shame that the zebra on the left has his head chopped off. A tighter crop might make this feel less unnatrual.

3 - Lovely capture, very bold pattern. Horizon might be tilting ever so lightly to the right and I would up the contrast a tad.

4 - Very nice composition, maybe could have done with a slightly shorter exposure?

6 - Nice, try upping the contrast and consider B&W? The bottom right and top right distracting corners need cropping out/cloning over as well.
 
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These are great! A bit of constructive criticism:

1 - it looks unfortunately like you've focussed just in front of the monkey, would be a nice shot otherwise.

2 - as has been pointed out, the horizon needs fixing. If I were you, I'd just clone over the blue to avoid loss of resolution. It's a shame that the zebra on the left has his head chopped off. A tighter crop might make this feel less unnatrual.

3 - Lovely capture, very bold pattern. Horizon might be tilting ever so lightly to the right and I would up the contrast a tad.

4 - Very nice composition, maybe could have done with a slightly shorter exposure?

6 - Nice, try upping the contrast and consider B&W? The bottom right and top right distracting corners need cropping out/cloning over as well.

Thank you so much for the critique! i love seeing reoccurring mistakes that happen, so it'll only get better :D but thank you!
 

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