Night Exposures C&C

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Trying out long exposures, all are unedited except converted through RAW processor and the last one had half a light post removed from the right side.

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Love #2&4. And the starburst on #3 is just amazing!!!
 

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I really like the colors in the first photo. Something about the glowy-ness (lol) and the contrast of gold to black. I think that shooting it again in portrait (with a little more space above the structure) would really benefit. Personal opinion as I find the other buildings in the shot to be a tad distracting.
 

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I hate to be the downer, but it seems that not much thought was put into these compositions. They are all technically fine, but not interesting to me. #2 is close, but I'm still asking myself... "So what?"
 

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I hate to be the downer, but it seems that not much thought was put into these compositions. They are all technically fine, but not interesting to me. #2 is close, but I'm still asking myself... "So what?"

I agree with this and I don't think the OP should be offended at all (in case he is)

The lighting in the last 2 are real nice, but as (keep wanting to call him Bazooka Joe lol), BAZOOKA said, just ehhh on the compositions
 
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Thanks all, how could the compositions be improved? What are things you guys look for?
 

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I like them all. But the last two are my favourite. Love 'em.
 

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