Well, I'm no pro and that's probably the kind of opinions you're looking for... but overall I think it's pretty good. Don't like the 'relaxed' position of the hand and the small cutted part in the bottom. But, besides that, I think it's pretty good.
im no pro either, i like the lighting. But like ^ said, the relaxed look doesnt really work, for me atleast. I wish it had a more "bad ass" factor lol. Her looking straight at the camera. just my opinion. nice photo overall.
The "relaxed look" would work better if you could see more of the model, so long as the rest of her body language matched. The crop should be fixed regardless, or framed better in camera.
I'm sure you'll also be hearing that it's in landscape orientation as well
Way too many hot/blown areas for my taste, and I think given the clothing/look of the model, what this really needs is for the cigarette to be in a long holder.