I love this pic, very noir feel to it. Would you mind posting your shooting specs for this, and what sort of camera you used? I'd be interested to know the specifics, maybe try something like this myself.
to me, it is cropped a little too tightly, which makes the cropping look obvious- whether it actually was cropped or not.
on the other hand, try reversing the image- making the tall part on the right. it may be more comfortable to look at. i like how the trees and the chipped cement make it look abandoned in a mad max/science fiction desolate future sort of way.