NSFW - Another Deja - Too much? Opinions wanted!

[Trever1t]

I have reservations about this one and won't point it out in hopes it's not too obvious to anyone else.


_POR4679-Edit by Bill Grayson, on Flickr

 

[Birddogyz]

Is it her right hand?

 

[Trever1t]

Is it her right hand?

What do you feel about her right hand? No, that's not my issue with it but I'm interested in hearing what you have to say.

 

[EIngerson]

My eye is drawn to the molding in the room behind her. Not a fan of it.

 

[Trever1t]

Not a fan of the molding? (Goes for another look) Molding?

 

[EIngerson]

Not a fan of the molding? (Goes for another look) Molding?

LOL. I had to. Glad you know my humor.

 

[crimbfighter]

Well, let's see.. first, she is a GORGEOUS model, sooo that's not the issue... is it her, umm, *eh-hem*, areola that's visible? Not complaining, just, uhhh, noticed

Honestly, the biggest thing that stands out to me is her belly seems over processed. Maybe it's not, but it looks like it to me. I also feel like it could be croped in a little more. After all, it's about the model and not the hotel room

Just my opinoin. Overall, though, very nice!

 

[medic2230]

Only thing that catches my eye is the corner of the bedspread sticking out and the edge of the door in the background. Other than that I like it!

 

[acparsons59]

The reflection in the door is kind of distracting/unflattering.

 

[sashbar]

The first thing I would do is to remove small distractive details on the background - 3 window hinges, 4 holes in the ceiling and that square thing in the corner. The best way would be to move left a bit when shooting to conceal the room corner behind the left door. The corner of the bedspread does indeed catch the eye.
The reflection in the door glass can be smoothed as well, no problem. Or even removed and then it all would look much more symmetrical.
I guess you mean something else, but I fail to notice it. If I start to look hard, I start seeing things of course, like, p.e. her head looks as if it was taken from another pic and put here at an awkward angle. But I am sure missing the point again..
I like the way this translucent door works as a frame for the subject and makes it look more contrast, sharp and present.

 

[Trever1t]

Well, let's see.. first, she is a GORGEOUS model, sooo that's not the issue... is it her, umm, *eh-hem*, areola that's visible? Not complaining, just, uhhh, noticed

Honestly, the biggest thing that stands out to me is her belly seems over processed. Maybe it's not, but it looks like it to me. I also feel like it could be croped in a little more. After all, it's about the model and not the hotel room

Just my opinoin. Overall, though, very nice!

Yes, that's it. She's had kids and I went overboard on her midsection. Glad it's not as obvious to everyone.

 

[Birddogyz]

Is it her right hand?

What do you feel about her right hand? No, that's not my issue with it but I'm interested in hearing what you have to say.

The area between the thumb and index finger, plus the knuckle just looks very odd.

 

[gsgary]

Cheap looking shoes don't go well with the awful underwear

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[Trever1t]

Cheap looking shoes don't go well with the awful underwear

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Unfortunately I am not able to purchase and store a model wardrobe. I do require models to show me samples of the wardrobe but I can't really tell other than style.

 

[FITBMX]

The two things that got me right off the bat are.
#1 The corner of the bed is very unsightly, but that doesn't hurt the photo.
#2 I noticed her stomach looked a little off. Her stomach kind overlaps the top strap on her outfit, it looks a little unnatural.
Know of this kills the photo at all for me, I was just really looking hard since you said that there was something wrong with the photo.
I really like this one.