I actually love this and I usually don't go for the typical nude/boudoir shots. It's very peaceful and serene. I am very distracted by the makeup? on her one eye though.
Much better.
The pillow blocking part of her face, don't like that so much, but all in all I well done photo.
In my opinion the foreground could be cropped out to just above your watermark...it adds nothing.
Beautiful model.
Nice shot - good lighting - not sure about the makeup unless the intention of the shot for for a makeup ad or other promo...
Personally the entire shot is ruined by the company TM logo on her... thou i totally understand the need for placing this - on a photo for critique in a forum of photographers my suggestion would be to place that as small as possible to not detract from the initial impression of the photo in the eye of the critiquer.
I love this. She looks so relaxed and comfortable. The light, shooting, and post are wonderful. I personally like the makeup. It's like she went out and had a good time, and was photographed very naturally, the day after.
I love this.