NYC Skyline!

Discussion in 'Landscape & Cityscape' started by Velez1390, Feb 26, 2018.

  1. Velez1390

    Velez1390 TPF Noob!

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    What's going on everyone? I just started my photography journey 2 weeks ago, and I want as much help as possible! I have thick skin, so have at it. All advice, suggestions, critiques, and tips are GREATLY appreciated!

    Nikon D3400
    Lens: 50mm/1.8
    F/16
    20 Second Exposure @ISO 360
    Picture #1:
    DSC_0206 (1).JPG

    Picture #2:
    Lens: 70-300mm/4.5-6.3 (Used it at 70mm)
    F/5.6, ISO 100
    20 Second Exposure
    DSC_0217.JPG

    Thank you for looking!


     
  2. rosh4u

    rosh4u No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    It seems like photos are getting blurred due to which clarity is getting disturbed.
     
  3. WesternGuy

    WesternGuy Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    The images are a bit overexposed. Do you have any with a shorter exposure time? Also, I am not sure what the fuzzy, vertical "bars" are in the second one - a fence(?). Regardless, I am not sure what they add to the compositional aspects of the image. I also would have cloned out those two objects in the water in the first one and the three in the second one.

    If, as you say, you are just starting out, as we all did at some point, you might want to do some reading about composition. A good one to start with is - Photography Composition Articles Library

    You might also want to do a web search for the topic "Nightscapes" - just a thought.

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    Velez1390 TPF Noob!

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    Thank you so much for taking your time to give me some pointers. Yes, that was a fence, and I don't know, I wanted to place the buildings in between the spaces. And yes, I am very new to photography. Picked up my Camera and lenses 10 days ago. So I'm still a baby, still learning. I'll try to post one with a shorter exposure time.
     
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