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[cgw149 174]

Nearly square format aids framing and enhances composition. Opinions overall welcome.

Fuji X-100T
23mm fixed(35mm equiv) f/5.6 1/100 sec Aperture Priority ISO 320 Natural a.m. light
Nik Silver Efex Pro 2 plug-in

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[Original katomi]

Hi a suggestion
I enlarged you image until the two black edges L&R were removed.
to me it drew me in more, what do you think

 

[cgw149 174]

Hi a suggestion
I enlarged you image until the two black edges L&R were removed.
to me it drew me in more, what do you think

Considered it but thought the square format had more impact. Thanks for the effort.

 

[jeffashman40 3]

It works very well in B&W. Very nice shot!

 

[CherylL]

Lots to take in with the photo. I like the space between the pole and the newer building in the back. I like the dark in the foreground and the edges. Framing is perfect. Did you take a few photos moving a foot here and there or was this the first shot? Wondering how you decided on the framing.

 

[cgw149 174]

Lots to take in with the photo. I like the space between the pole and the newer building in the back. I like the dark in the foreground and the edges. Framing is perfect. Did you take a few photos moving a foot here and there or was this the first shot? Wondering how you decided on the framing.

Cropped from the bland foreground. Saw it initially working as a square. The face caught me first. Favorite dive bar once located here, accessible thru a doorway in the left background. Covid lockdown victim, sadly.
My Ricoh GR II does 1:1 aspect which I love. Wish the Fuji did.

 

[smoke665]

I realize the border edge is a personal choice that many people like, unfortunately I've never been a fan of borders, finding them distracting.

As mentioned by Cheryl, there is a lot to look at here. Your choice of framing with strong leading lines and the central face does a great job of keeping the eye focused.

Initially I'll admit I wasn't a big fan of the processing but the more I looked at it the more I liked it. The grittiness it imparts adds to vibe of the image.

 

[cgw149 174]

I realize the border edge is a personal choice that many people like, unfortunately I've never been a fan of borders, finding them distracting.

As mentioned by Cheryl, there is a lot to look at here. Your choice of framing with strong leading lines and the central face does a great job of keeping the eye focused.

Initially I'll admit I wasn't a big fan of the processing but the more I looked at it the more I liked it. The grittiness it imparts adds to vibe of the image.

Thanks, smoke665. I often shoot around downtown Toronto with a couple other lost boys who love pinhole, LF film and glass plate and anything else that swallows film. They tolerate me and my digital stuff.
Their results influenced my post choices here--and that iffy border!. It's an interesting and much-loved area we're hoping isn't swept away by impinging redevelopment.

 

[smoke665]

It's an interesting and

Hope it doesn't end up like one of my favorite areas. After my last shoot there they posted No Trespassing signs everywhere. Apparently it was a popular place for others as well.

 

[Original katomi]

No trespassing….. emm I’m not iam photographing

 

[GWWhite]

Good image! Leading lines takes one's eye straight to the face painting and overall processing I think works VERY well for the photo! Borders can be distracting, but here it really leaves me with no opinion good or bad. But if one can keep the fuzzy edge and lose the white of the border would work well also. The ragged edge adds to the processing for it if I imagine the white gone. Using a .png with a transparent background I think would work well here.

 

[John 2]

I like this as it stands. To me the border is certainly not essential to the composition but it does seem appropriate for the subject.

 

[cgw149 174]

Appreciate the comments from those who stopped by. Thanks!

 

[mikbone]

I like the "gritty" effect .