Old Farm Shack - C&C Please

[danok1212]

I found this old "shack" yesterday, and went this a.m. to grab a couple of shots. Comments, criticism, and advice are welcome!

1.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/nyc_wedding/3054285138/

2.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/nyc_wedding/3053449175/

3.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/nyc_wedding/3053445231/

Thanks,
Dan Kennedy

 

[keybq]

The first is my fav. The others i think that they are just to cluttered.

 

[LaFoto]

You chose to photograph this shed in some nice light!
Pity about the large shadow in the first.
The second is nice with the amount of unused farm machinery, only is there something seemingly modern and "still-in-use" in the left background right behind the tractor tyre which is distracting. It shouldn't be there, it's taking away from the overall "abandoned" look you tried to capture.

 

[danok1212]

LaFoto:

D'oh! Thanks, I totally missed that! Guess I have to learn to look at everything, not just the main subject. Luckily, I can go back and try to find better angles, etc. The "stuff"' isn't going anywhere!

Keybq:

Thanks for your observation (and I do mean that ). I was going for the "pile o' abandoned machinery" feel.

-Dan Kennedy