old man staring at the seashore (critics)

[raphaelcmoraes]

Hey guys, took this picture 2 months ago while I travelled through Chile, South America. I would like to be criticized as long as I'm new on this art. Thank you

 

[Bo4key]

It doesn't have much context. We can't see his face, nor what he's really looking at.

 

[hamlet]

The first one lets me see what he's looking at. In the second one you've really captured the essence of the stereotypical old man, he's got the sunglasses, hat, back pain, cane and everything.