Paparazzi...

[RMThompson]

Tshirt shoot for www.snorgtees.com.

C&C welcome.

 

[Big Mike]

The kicker light is too bright...it's blowing out her arm, hand & side...not to mention that spot on the door.
Her face feels too dark and too red. I suppose that helps to focus attention on the shirt rather than the model...but having her looking down is probably enough to do that, without her being so dark.

 

[RMThompson]

The kicker light is too bright...it's blowing out her arm, hand & side...not to mention that spot on the door.
Her face feels too dark and too red. I suppose that helps to focus attention on the shirt rather than the model...but having her looking down is probably enough to do that, without her being so dark.

I'll agree on the darkness... maybe it's a BIT too much. I can work on that.

But the kicker is SUPPOSED to be like that... emulating a paparazzi!

 

[Ls3D]

And it is just like me to notice her zipper is going the right direction! Nice work.

-Shea