Patterns and Uneveness

[Demers18]

1.

[/URL] Rectanngles by lee.demers, on Flickr[/IMG]

2.

[/URL] Rule of Thirds by lee.demers, on Flickr[/IMG]\

3.

[/URL] Aged by lee.demers, on Flickr[/IMG]

4.

[/URL] Patterns 1 - Colour by lee.demers, on Flickr[/IMG]

 

[KenC]

I like #3 a lot for the texture and color, and also the framing. It looks like it's about to fall down.

#1 & 2 are a little bland compositionally. Yeah, I know #2 follows the ROT, but there just isn't anything interesting at the points. It also bothers me that it's not taken straight-on. I'd prefer a close-up of the peeling paint on the beam, but I realize I have strange tastes.

#4 is not bad, but what really draws me is the lower window. I think just filling the frame with that could work.

 

[Demers18]

I like #3 a lot for the texture and color, and also the framing. It looks like it's about to fall down.

#3 is my favorite also, I'm actually quite surprised that door hasn't fallen especially when you see the rest of the building.

#1 & 2 are a little bland compositionally. Yeah, I know #2 follows the ROT, but there just isn't anything interesting at the points. It also bothers me that it's not taken straight-on. I'd prefer a close-up of the peeling paint on the beam, but I realize I have strange tastes.

I was trying something new with the ROT by shooting on an angle. I wasn't sure about it myself but was curious to know what others thought. I contemplated shooting just the peeling pain on the beam, however I've done that a few times already and wanted to try and find other aspects to shoot.

#4 is not bad, but what really draws me is the lower window. I think just filling the frame with that could work.

Hmm, I have a few shots that I may be able to crop in that way, I will have to try it out.

Thanks for the CC Ken, much appreciated.