Peek_A_Boo!

[Mr.EightA]

This is one of my favorite photos, However I am new to this and would appreciate feed back

 

[Rick58]

Maybe a little dark and flat?

 

[Mr.EightA]

thank you, what would recommend to add depth?

 

[Rick58]

I'm sorry, by "flat" I meant low contrast, not depth

 

[Mr.EightA]

gotcha

 

[AlanKlein85 2]

This is a nice picture of two kids that the parents will enjoy forever. The boys eyes expression is interesting. But you can only see the back of the head of the girl. The picture would have more interest if you could have moved so that you could have caught the two kids looking at each other,or at least so you got the girls face in as well. If you shot at a slight angle you could get both faces and elimnate the lettering between the crib bars. These distract the viewer from the children as well. Rick made a good point about the exposure. You might also take the towel out of the frame as it draws attention away from the children. Nice shot.

 

[Mr.EightA]

Thank you for the feedback