Strange composition; Colors look good.
A few things I see wrong;
- Hard to see the face/No eyes
I would rather be overexposed just to get the eyes/face under the brim than lose them all together.
-Too loose of framing. Not sure of your lens availability/cropping ability but I would definitely do as the old saying goes for some sport togs: "Shoot tight, and crop tighter" if possible.
Other than those things I'd say you have a nice image, and the action is good. I might even get a little lower to the ground to shoot them or simply at around eye-level. It helps out by thinning your depth of field slightly and IMHO draws the attention to the subject. I don't like how close the lower frame is to the foot though. Overall, neat shot with good action and colors! Refinement of your technique only takes time and experience! The more you shoot the more you learn!
Best regards,
Austin
