I think your framing seems to be improving! I'd still keep an eye on the edges of the frame so you're not catching the edges of people or objects, etc. (like #5 I might have waited til the person in the jeans moved on by or try cropping the top edge slightly) but this is a nice set, I feel like I can tell what the pictures are about, what the subject is.
I think the one with the girl with her eyes closed actually works - she looks like she's sucking down that drink thru that straw in one long gulp! like she needs to come up for air - which kids do sometimes so for me the picture tells a story. #7 is priceless, what a face!
That's how I learned, what my mom did, you peel and use the tip of the knife to remove the eyes, the peeling doesn't necessarily get them out. Of course that's not what I do now, I don't peel much of anything unless absolutely necessary! and I like potato skins.
And with kids who needs to peel to carve a design for stamping?? not me! lol