A could not agree more with Gary about the speeding and practicing. And could not agree more with Lev that what Gary said was soooo right.
It is so important to learn to separate the moment from the action and the frame from what our eyes are seeing.
I often compare myself to a pigeon with its selective colour vision. Pigeons have a rare mental ability to see the crumbles of bread and other food they are searching for in colour whereas the rest is b&w. So they are not distracted by stones and other useless things and can find even the tiniest crumbles of food very quickly.
In that respect we are all pigeons (not exactly as advanced, but still..) We see an interesting subject, and our eye, or rather brain adjusts to the picture, ignoring distractions, screwing the perspective, minimising light contrasts, changing colours etc.
We take a shot without, as Gary says, previsualizing, and the camera shows ruthlessly what there really is, not what our brain wants us to see.
And it really is ruthless as shown in the OP images - with all those highlights, clatter, compressed perspective, busy background with distracting lines etc etc, with the main object thrown into this mess instead of standing out as it was when the OP looked at it.
So we have a choice - either to see like pigeons or to practice and learn to see like cameras (and photographers) do.