Playing with Motion and colour - Please critique

[Estylo]

Hey everyone,

This is my first time posting here, but I have been snooping around
Here is a photo that I took of a band, about a week ago in Philadelphia.

The space was very narrow and I shot with a 50 f/1.8 (Only available lens I have at the moment)
The lighting was red and very poorly lit so I made due with the situation. I decided to play with colour so I changed my WB to Tungsten and approach it artistically with long exposure and rear curtain on my flash.
Any pointers or critiques in general are welcome.

Thanks in advance
Estilo

 

[bribrius]

I like the color and blur (not a artist here) but I like it in the art sense. When I blew it up it seemed to have some noise in it. looks better small. I mean, its not bad. I picture it as being something like we would have on the inside foldout of music cassette tapes cases with band pics. Seems too look okay kept to that size too. id have some doubts on a medium or large print on something like this perhaps someone else can comment in that aspect.

 

[Estylo]

True say Bribrius, I said the exact same thing with a friend, about the inner cover of an album or something of the sort.

 

[dxqcanada3]

Hmm, looks like Jimi Hendrix playing the drums.

 

[timor]

Honestly ? I don't like the scale of colours. All is murky and even with the blur picture should be readable, there has to be a pleasing pattern of high and low values. Look here. Here, despite the blur you can read the picture instantly.
http://www.thephotoforum.com/forum/general-gallery/359455-field.html