Please critique this shot =)

[willma88]

I took this at the NSW art gallery in Australia. Your comments please? Thankyou

 

[PhotoXopher]

I like it.... composition, exposure, everything – looks great!

 

[Yemme]

I second that... Did you get any close ups?

 

[AdamBomb]

Awesome shot but you wanted some critiquing so I would have to say I would have liked to see the frame moved to the left just a little bit to balance the pillars, or more-so their bases.

Does that make sense?

 

[willma88]

Awesome shot but you wanted some critiquing so I would have to say I would have liked to see the frame moved to the left just a little bit to balance the pillars, or more-so their bases.

Does that make sense?

Yep, that defs does! I guess thats something i need to work on, being a little more on top of things when it comes to framing.

Cheers mate

 

[willma88]

I did not get any closeup, maybe next time. The lady at the museum didnt like poeple taking photos.... :S

 

[mylo]

It's one BEAUTIFUL shot! I LOVE the arc shaped dome with repeated motifs and the lighting in the picture. Are those natural light?

 

[willma88]

Thanks mate, No its not natural light, there was a spotlight thing behind me which lit up the dome areas. It was actually rather dim.

 

[Bravotwofive]

I think it works well. In the absence of a tilt shift lens for the pilars I think the dome composition makes it very nice.
Good work.

Chuck