Please help how can I improve?

[revenater]

How could I improve this pictureView attachment 9295

 

[Patriot]

What do you think is wrong with it?

 

[Josh66]

Get closer, or zoom in more.

 

[revenater]

Well me nothing I like it but everything I post seams to have something wrong so I am trying to improve and just wanting constructive criticism.

 

[slackercruster]

blast away more

 

[michael9000000]

Hi! Your little supermodel is adorable, so you're off to a great start! Here's the two things that immediately came to my mind...

1. When photographing people, it's generally a bad idea to cut them off at a major joint (elbow, wrist, etc...) In this case, you cut the little lady off at the knee, and it brings unnecessary tension to the photo.

2. Your model is little bit too far off center. The extra space on the right side of the photo adds nothing to the overall image.

Thanks for sharing! Keep shooting!