Very nice, I think I would like it more if his head was tilted more to his left to frame him more in the bars and connect more to his daughter. But still, very powerful portrait!.
I appreciate that you were goin for something a little different - rather then a 'straight' portrait ......with the father/daughter behind the wrought iron fencing ... however..
This is a wonderful portrait and I definately sense a bond between them but I SO wish the fencing wasnt there .......