“Portrait Of A Bibliophile…”

[enezdez]

Thanks For Looking Any Comments/Criticism Will Be Appreciated.

Enezdez

 

[timor]

 

[enezdez]

Finally you like something of mine lol - Thank you & have a great day!

 

[Gary A.]

A bit muddy, could use a bit of punch/contrast.

 

[enezdez]

A bit muddy, could use a bit of punch/contrast.

Great shot, for me,I'd put all the attention on "the bibliophile" and completely cut away the 2 people in the background.

Gerard

Thank you both for your inputs!

 

[windzup]

Great shot and the book in the centre of the photo is my kinda read.

 

[enezdez]

Great shot and the book in the centre of the photo is my kinda read.

Thank You!

 

[Derrel]

A bit muddy, could use a bit of punch/contrast.

I feel the same way...to my way of thinking, there is a lot of the scene is shown as mostly a large mass of light-toned gray values in the center and left part of the iframe, and it looks to me as if the application of a bit more clarity, or contrast, might be able to add punch to the overall bookstore scene.

 

[enezdez]

A bit muddy, could use a bit of punch/contrast.

A bit muddy, could use a bit of punch/contrast.

I feel the same way...to my way of thinking, there is a lot of the scene is shown as mostly a large mass of light-toned gray values in the center and left part of the iframe, and it looks to me as if the application of a bit more clarity, or contrast, might be able to add punch to the overall bookstore scene.

Here is a revised "Punched" version:

I think it looks a little better - what do guys think?

Thanks!

 

[Derrel]

I think this version,with its added contrast, makes a stronger photo.

 

[Gary A.]

A bit muddy, could use a bit of punch/contrast.

A bit muddy, could use a bit of punch/contrast.

I feel the same way...to my way of thinking, there is a lot of the scene is shown as mostly a large mass of light-toned gray values in the center and left part of the iframe, and it looks to me as if the application of a bit more clarity, or contrast, might be able to add punch to the overall bookstore scene.

Here is a revised "Punched" version:

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I think it looks a little better - what do guys think?

Thanks!

aaaahhhhh ... much nicer. But, (the big but), a touch of dodging on the guy and the books would really make the eye focus on the primary subject. I'd take a little off the top, the ceiling light is a distracting element.