1. The background is a bit too busy for me.
2. The subject is merging into the background and his shirt is overexposed which draws my eyes away from the subject.
3. Fix the distortion(flag poles leaning right, his bench leaning left), crop a bit tighter, and it might work, but with the subject looking away and down, not so great for any kind of connection to be drawn with a viewer.
I find #2 the most interesting, but I just can't get past some of the processing, but it is an intiguing idea.