i like the first one the most but im not too fond of the black boarder you put. If this were for like a model thing it would be good but just as a normal portrait I think her face is alittle too perfect now. Try doing it in too layers, keep teh bottom the original and edit the top, make it fake like it is, and turn down the opacity on the top a little bit. give me a fe wminutes ill make one for you