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[Cheex]

Help me decide if what I'm doing is right... C&C on adjustments from the original. Do you think I did the right thing?

I found a cool cinema that reminded me of old times so I took the colored version, turned it dark and then further adjusted it to make it less flat. What do you think?


Original:

Mid:

Final:

Every time I look at it I think I'm doing the wrong thing.... what would you do to it?

 

[Unsung]

For starters, I would definitely crop out that distracting light. The composition isn't really interesting and you can't make the theater symmetrical with that tree on the left. It's just not a good composition to me.

 

[Noxire]

I like the processing in the last, screams film noir to me. However, as previously mentioned the original image isn't that exciting and it also seems to be a tad crooked.