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Help me decide if what I'm doing is right... C&C on adjustments from the original. Do you think I did the right thing?

I found a cool cinema that reminded me of old times so I took the colored version, turned it dark and then further adjusted it to make it less flat. What do you think?


Original:
colrod.jpg


Mid:
DPP_0028_29_30_tonemapped.jpg


Final:
lessflat.jpg


Every time I look at it I think I'm doing the wrong thing.... what would you do to it?
 
For starters, I would definitely crop out that distracting light. The composition isn't really interesting and you can't make the theater symmetrical with that tree on the left. It's just not a good composition to me.
 
I like the processing in the last, screams film noir to me. However, as previously mentioned the original image isn't that exciting and it also seems to be a tad crooked.
 

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