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TamiAz

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Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated! :D

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Interesting use of shapes, textures...perfect for b&w.
 
1. lacks balance
2. cropped a little tight
3. cropped a little tight
 
I especially like the first one. I wish the DOF was little better on the close part of the tire tread, though.
 
I like the first one a lot. The textures of the treads and the lighting are interesting, and the composition is good - you could try cropping a little on the left and top to make the edge of the tires a little closer to a corner-to-corner diagonal - might not work as well, but take a look - this would also remove some spots on the top tire that are right on the edge of the frame and maybe a little distracting. You could darken the lighter tires a little bit and gradually as you go towards the right edge - this would make the OOF parts less obvious. I'd also try to recover some detail in that bright spot in the middle. I hope this was shot in raw.
 

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