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  1. Bukitimah

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    Being perfectly honest, these are pretty bad.

    I'm no portrait photographer... but, just off the top of my head...

    - Dead on flash is VERY bad.
    - Poses are not pleasing or complimentary
    - Backgrounds are unpleasant
    - Hair is mostly pretty poorly styled or a mess
    - Clothing isn't great

    And that's just what I can tell you about. I'd say try again. Do a bit of research beforehand.
     
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    the bunny beat me to it... lighting in the first pic is very bad, and not very good in the rest. I like the crop in the first, but not the second or third, which i think were cropped too tight. the white wall and shadow in the first pic really kill what might have been a nice portrait. im not sure about the clothing in the second or third shot 'cause i cant see any of it.
     
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    You're right, they are pretty, but better photography would enhance their beauty.

    And your portfolio.
     
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    And creepy
     
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    reminds me of the ring or something....
     
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    Hey guys, thank you for your comments. I do hope I did pick up a pointer or 2 from here. Yes, thy aren't models but some participants of an event which I attend. I just took some shots. Portrait is very new for me and I would definitely want to work on it.

    I do have difficulties when it comes to lighting. I somehow prefer 'brighter' than 'darker'. Sometimes on screen, I can't tell till I blow it up on the 42 inches screen.

    Maybe it is just more practice. Thank you again.
     
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    Very pretty girls, especially #3. I love cosplay, but I think these photos could be greatly improved with the suggestions previously made in this thread.
     
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    Thank you Jaenie. I did some studio protrait previouly. She is a part time model. Please give your comments.

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