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[Tight Knot]

Hi all,

What do you think of this photo + caption?
C&C appreciated, no matter how harsh or for that matter, nice.

 

[Designer]

Pithy verse. Photo seems gray all over, as if it needs some contrast or different elements.

 

[charlie76]

I can dig it...I feel the same. My wife is pregnant with twins right now...I'll keep your words in mind. Thanks for sharing your perspective

 

[thelittlewhimsy]

Agreed with the gray- perhaps one color element, or something to really draw your eye in?

 

[Tight Knot]

Pithy verse. Photo seems gray all over, as if it needs some contrast or different elements.

Thanks for the C&C Designer,

I had to look up "pithy" in the dictionary :blushing:.
I actually lowered the opacity of the layer to make sure the writing was clearly visible.
Here is the original:

 

[Tight Knot]

I can dig it...I feel the same. My wife is pregnant with twins right now...I'll keep your words in mind. Thanks for sharing your perspective

Thanks Charlie,

Best of luck to both of you with the little ones. May you have a tremendous amount of love between all of you forever.

 

[Tight Knot]

Agreed with the gray- perhaps one color element, or something to really draw your eye in?

Thanks thelittlewhimsy,

Did you see the original? Any better?

 

[lennon33x]

I can dig it...I feel the same. My wife is pregnant with twins right now...I'll keep your words in mind. Thanks for sharing your perspective

Congrats friend. My wife and I had twins in April 2012. Most amazing experience of my life. Best of luck to you both (also enjoy your sleep now). Lol.