Pumpkin Patch Beauty

[Lucky7photog]

SO I did this shoot Yesterday C&C are welcomed!!!

1.
_DSC0169 by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

2.
_DSC0249 by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

3.
_DSC0229 by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

4.
_DSC0175 by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

 

[Derrel]

Well, this young woman has a real All-American beauty thing going on. Your exposures seem to be made of up a slight bit too much flash, and not quite enough ambient light. She is so pretty it's hard to take a really bad picture of her.

 

[pixilstudio]

i agree the face looks a little flat
maybe more contrast in the 1st two

 

[Lucky7photog]

heres the first two edited. And unfortunately it was really cloudy and gray ouside and there wasnt much natural light.


_DSC0249 by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr


_DSC0167 by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

 

[Lucky7photog]

_DSC0175 by Lucky 7 Photography, on Flickr

these were edited a bit more with some contrast let me know if they are any better! Thanks

 

[Trever1t]

I agree with Derrel's observation/comment. Just a bit too much flash but sweet compositions!

 

[Lucky7photog]

thanks Im still learning the technique of off camera flash i will try harder next time thanks for the feedback!!

 

[Trever1t]

Where in CA are you?

 

[Lucky7photog]

I'm in Humboldt County

 

[Trever1t]

Sweet. Hello from San Jose!

 

[jordansgotfaith]

Not bad at all! The girl is gorgeous. Like the others said, a little too much flash but not a bad start...Good job.