Quick! Family portrait help!

[ababysean]

I got some quick family portraits and I would like some feedback before I send them to the family.

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[rusty9]

a lot of pixelation going on here. comp. and exp. looks good, though.

 

[ababysean]

Do you think the pixelation is because I took it off my facebook folder?

Here is the one without the noiseware and the file is larger

 

[rusty9]

that pic still looks bad (with pixelation)

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

I'm not sure what it is here but this image just looks too colorful to me... My eye doesn't find a place to rest.. its constantly looking... for something...

I was thinking that this might be a good candidate for a B&W....

 

[rusty9]

BusRider, i don't quite like the BW version. it works well in color.

 

[Opher]

just desaturate a bit as BusRider said its just to much