Railroad Shop

[unpopular]

A bit cliche, but it's what i've got today

 

[Jaemie]

I love the roof texture and the contrasting textures in general. Overall though, it feels too symmetrical, perhaps flat, and even a bit overexposed(?). I'd love to be able to click to a hi-res version. I'd also reduce the amount of visible sky unless it had something more interesting to add.

 

[sleist]

Not symetrical enough for me. As a result, I would lose the symetry completely by cropping out a sliver in the left and crop out the far right window at a point mid way between the 2 windows. Symetry doesn't work for me unless there's perfect symetry. Others probably feel differently. Then I would either adjust the black point, the curves, or increase the contrast. The image has nice texture, but is too flat and the impact is lost.

 

[unpopular]

I don't think there lacks contrast. The shadows are open, which is something I value. I'm not a big fan of the punchy slide film look which we've come to expect in color photography. Symmetry could use some work, I'll look into cropping when I get the chance. Not so sure about the sky. I feel it adds atmospheric context, but I appreciate your thoughts, Jaemie, and will see if less sky helps at all. Thanks for the feedback.