RAW shooting C&C

[DisasterDan]

Okay so im slowly getting the RAW thing down. So, how am i doing?

Just some snaps from today

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Thanks for any input

 

[vtf]

I find #1 cluttered, not sure what the subject is or where I should focus.
#2 The knickerkbook sign spoils it for me. Clone it out if possible.
#3 I like this but find the car fender distracting. Crop it differently or clone it out.
#4 Cute but centered, kinda snapshotish to me. Next time get lower and at angle so you can take the shot following the curve up inside the slide.
#5 I don't know if I like this or not, I see what you were going for. Not sure. I hate that she's oof. Oh well.
Overall good tries, keep at it. Exposures and focus seem to be good. Just work on eliminating distracting elements where possible. :thumbup:

 

[DisasterDan]

I find #1 cluttered, not sure what the subject is or where I should focus.
#2 The knickerkbook sign spoils it for me. Clone it out if possible.
#3 I like this but find the car fender distracting. Crop it differently or clone it out.
#4 Cute but centered, kinda snapshotish to me. Next time get lower and at angle so you can take the shot following the curve up inside the slide.
#5 I don't know if I like this or not, I see what you were going for. Not sure. I hate that she's oof. Oh well.
Overall good tries, keep at it. Exposures and focus seem to be good. Just work on eliminating distracting elements where possible. :thumbup:

Thanks for the input Much appreciated and well needed