To my mind, it would have helped the photo to have your ENTIRE two subjects inside your frame, with nothing as important as the "rocking vats" (don't know if that word exists?)being cut off. So I'd say this one's too tightly framed.
To my mind, it would have helped the photo to have your ENTIRE two subjects inside your frame, with nothing as important as the "rocking vats" (don't know if that word exists?)being cut off. So I'd say this one's too tightly framed.