I think:
If only it were in colour, that might have met the given title more.
I also think:
Too large part (on left) not in focus for my liking.
I think:
Good light but too bright in parts right behind this ... erm ... rusty :scratch: ... thing (what would be the English word for it?).
And I think that I would love to see this cropped in half and in a vertical frame.