San Francisco

[Phazan]

Critique is appreciated!

1...Tried to capture the stress some people have after a day of work...Did I succeed?

2.

3.

4...Too boring?

Thanks for looking!

 

[MarcusM]

I like #1. Where was 3 taken at? I used to go to SF all the time (I love that city) but I never saw that sculpture.

 

[Traxtor]

#1 was a really nice way to capture the stress and for #4, maybe a boring subject, but from the artistic view it was a great shot!

 

[Phazan]

Number 3 was taken somewhere between the Embarcadero Bart station, and Ghirardelli square..Somewhere along that main tourist road.

Thanks for the comments!

 

[DragonHeart]

#1 definately shows stress... looks like he just didnt quite make it on time to catch the train. great shots...

 

[Peniole]

Much better that the first posting, #1 definitely shows stress, #2-3 are technically well done. #4 the hotspots on the neck draw away attention from the very nice details captured in the eye and beak.

 

[Hobbes]

oh man. The first shot really reminds me of the subway here in Stockholm during the rush hour -.- definitely not something I want to do every day if I don't have to.
nice shot!

 

[ZackHughesPhotography]

i see the stress in 1
but would have made that amazing
is if the womans head was down showing more emotion, it would have shown a scene as if the people both missed the ?subway?

but i like it

 

[Traxtor]

Haha! Now that I look more close it looks like the woman was hit on the cheek by the train. Funny that

 

[Phazan]

Hey, thanks for all the comments!

And the funny thing about number 1 is the stress you see, isn't about the train, haha. The trains come there every 5 minutes or so. The people in the station just seemed so depressed, and stressed out..I guess from their jobs.