Sea Sky Sun Down

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  1. zutty

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  2. Tim Tucker

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    I don't think the composition works, there's just too much dead weight on the left side. Crop just in front of the left headland and see how you feel after getting used to it.
     
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  3. wyogirl

    wyogirl Oh crop!

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    I actually disagree with Tim. I think it has good balance and your eye roams the whole frame.
     
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    I almost feel like you included too little of the bottom rocky part so that it just feels like a distraction rather than a foreground component. I could see a potential shot with the boats in the foreground (silhoutted) with some of the clouds included and the left and right land edges included as a frame
     
  5. jcdeboever

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    Zutty, that is an excellent composition, actually quite amazing. It may be out of reach for some because of it's sophistication. It is so good, it will piss people off. Your a flipping genius. Well done sir.

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    Really? You can't be serious. Have another drink....

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