I disagree...who cares if her hair is oof? I prefer shots wide open.
My only cc would be that her skin looks a bit orange...which it could very well be, if she's used a fake tanning lotion....but maybe double check that, just in case?
I don't like the pose in number 8...makes her legs look super stumpy and the bottom of her shoes are distracting. I like the look of number 13, but her feet are cut off. Keep at it!
#13 was one of those accidental test shots that I thought would be over exposed but worked. It really bugs me that she has no feet but I liked the look so much I included it. I tend to shoot wide open. and don't mind if hair is off as long as the eyes are sharp. I see what you mean about # 8. I should have had more of an angle on it.
You know, I've been looking more at #13. I really love how the bricks come out only in the shadow. It's just such a cool effect. Now I really want to try something like this.