Senior Series- C&C welcome (7 images)

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#1 is too orange looking
#2 has too much of a soft focus/or just out of focus
#3 is the best of the series
In general i think the ones after 3 are a little oversaturated
th effect in #6 looks overdone
that's just my opinion
 
Haha- the "over saturated" comment kind of makes me laugh. I didn't up the saturation on any of them. Wet cool spring in MD, and everything REALLY is that green!
 
#1-too "oompa loompa-Ish" =/ lol if you could fix the skin tones a little itd be a great shot!
#2-Like it, but a little soft. Although, Not bad!
#3-Very nice shot!
#4- like the scenery--but the pose.. seems SO uncomfortable..like a stiff slouch.
#5- ..the slouch. eh. but loving the scenery and the emotions behind the shot.
#6- Retake. lol... SUPER bright... eep
#7- the Missing hand bugs me.. but its a good shot, relaxed..
 
to me personally all of them are edited a bit too much. He looks like Barbie's boyfriend - doll like.

Other than that i like the pics.

P.S. But I am all pro naturall look as much as possible, so it may be just a matter of taste
 
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I think the color balance is all over the place on these, with unpleasabt yellowish skin tones on 1,4,and 5. Frame 6, the shot of him in the white shirt and necktie is a nice frame, but I'm not fond of that Old 1970's Look processing you gave it; I think it might look better as a natural, full-color shot instead of a desaturated look. The posing in frame 5 is very feminine.
 

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