Senior Session for CC

[Wendy Mayo]

Hey guys! I'm brand new to this forum and would just like to know what you think of these images Suggestions?

 

[Derrel]

Decent images, but a really obnoxious watermark...I'd suggest a much smaller logo, and perhaps one with at least one eyeball on the face..better yet, just be Wendy Mayo "the fun photographer" in quotes, without the line drawing of the eyeless female head...

 

[g-fi]

I think you nailed the lighting, and I don't hate your watermark lol, but HER HANDS. In the first two pictures in particular it's distracting, does her hand naturally do that or is it just a bit of over-posing? #2 is definitely my favorite of the set. I'm not a big fan of seeing the soles of the shoes in #1, particularly if they're dirty, but sometimes it can be unavoidable. With #3 it feels like a little too much tree, too few girl, if you know what I mean. Good job!

 

[SageMark]

I agree with Derrel here. The watermark and the boob compliment each other nicely. However, your other work -very bright photos, may be your style though. I like to slightly darken the edges to keep the clients eyes on the photos instead of wandering off. If this is your style, change nothing.

 

[SrBiscuit]

nice set overall.
echo the watermark sentiment.

on the first, the shoes kill it for me. i would think barefoot would be a better choice...the soles of those shoes are dirty and kinda take away from the image.

 

[Big Mike]

Welcome to the forum.

I agree with the first two relies. The watermark is very annoying and the posing of her hands is hurting otherwise great photos.

 

[Greasy]

In #2 there is a mark around her leg, almost as if she had been wearing leggings or something. Might be something to think about cloning out.

I didn't even notice the shoes at first. Looking at it now, I don't think its a HUGE deal, but certainly something to think about.

 

[Wendy Mayo]

Thanks for the comments guys. I love my watermark, but I never considered if anyone else did or not. Something to consider. I know what you mean about her hands -- my bad for not noticing it while photographing.

 

[MohaimenK]

Thanks for the comments guys. I love my watermark, but I never considered if anyone else did or not. Something to consider. I know what you mean about her hands -- my bad for not noticing it while photographing.

The watermark isn't so bad, it's just the size that's distracting. Perhaps make the face smaller? But it also says too much imo

Pix are fine though

 

[Erin9005]

I think they look very good.

 

[dcketcham]

I know what you mean about her hands -- my bad for not noticing it while photographing.

hands are very hard...
but... its just something to watch for...

 

[dcketcham]

i really like the set...
the lighting is great..
the different compositions really help out

did you use a reflector on any of these by chance? as i already said, the lighting is great, but could help out with the shadows on the side of the face a little, evening out a little more... just my .02

 

[Wendy Mayo]

Nope, didn't use a reflector. Some of these were done with natural light and some with OCF.