I love the second shot although I see what Christie means about the shadow under the nose. The tone of skin in the first I think is too cool. Beautiful girl.
Nice posing and good connection to the model but I agree about the lighting. It gives the tiny mustache look, which she may not even notice of course. Also in the second I would crop some of that empty space off of the left giving it more a rule of thirds look. It will draw you straight to the eyes then
As an afterthought, try applying the cooling filter to the background and floor only. The contrast of warm and cold colours should make for an interesting pic.
i love em. great poses. i like the color in these, but would also like to see her dark brown hair, w the white sheets. idk what it is but i like to see the fresh white bright sheets in pics like these.
Nice pose but the coloring seems a bit off. I also would like to see the sheets white and agree the shadow under the nose draws attention. On shot #2 I would like to see her re positioned a bit more to the left to fill up some of that empty space. Very nice job over all though. Beautiful girl
I like em both. Good poses and great model, but I agree with what some have said about the tones. The lighting doesn't bother me that much, but I would try tweaking the WB on these to make them seem more inviting. The colors look either under or overprocessed depending on what you were going for, but I think you can make it work with some extra time in post.