Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by paulk_68, Feb 23, 2009.
Yup, another picture from Romania...
So I'm guessing that no response means that it sucks.
Nothing wrong with the basic composition.
But when my eye is drawn to the backlit opening there seems to be a figure standing(?) there. I can't be sure. It's annoying.
If you wished to include a figure, one descending or ascending the steps would have been preferable. Black garb would have added impact. Traditional garb would have added a sense of timelessness to the scene, whilst modern would have added contrast.
Hopefully, you can re-visit the scene. It offers promise. Watch tonal range, though. The darks may be blocked.
Yes , The stairs ,the hand rail and the roof ledge are all wonderfull lines leading you to the bright area in the sun beems. A wonderfull composition needing contrast. A stop less exposure and or a little post.
An element going up the stair to the light would be cool.
I cannot see the picture...
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