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paulk_68

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Yup, another picture from Romania...

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So I'm guessing that no response means that it sucks.
 
Nothing wrong with the basic composition.

But when my eye is drawn to the backlit opening there seems to be a figure standing(?) there. I can't be sure. It's annoying.

If you wished to include a figure, one descending or ascending the steps would have been preferable. Black garb would have added impact. Traditional garb would have added a sense of timelessness to the scene, whilst modern would have added contrast.

Hopefully, you can re-visit the scene. It offers promise. Watch tonal range, though. The darks may be blocked.
 
Yes , The stairs ,the hand rail and the roof ledge are all wonderfull lines leading you to the bright area in the sun beems. A wonderfull composition needing contrast. A stop less exposure and or a little post.

An element going up the stair to the light would be cool.
 

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