Sillhouettes on the New River C&C

[Fingtam]

This was shot at f/7.1, 1/125 sec, ISO 100
I also just noticed that I did a very poor job cloning out some kind of vertical cable towards the right.
Other than that I'd appreciate critiques.
Thank.

 

[The_Traveler]

something in the image needs to be interesting.
typically with a silhouette, the silhouetted object is smaller and the picture gains impact from the identifiable silhouette against the interesting background.
As it is, there are large silhouettes taking up most of the frame, the background is ambiguous and the color uninspiring.

 

[JoshuaSimPhotography]

Yes I agree, I think u should have shown more of the pier. That could be a very interesting focal point.

 

[pixilstudio]

true the silhouettes are kinda just blobs with head. would be nice to see more

 

[davisphotos]

I usually try to have subjects in a silhouette interacting with each others, and I include more of the background. As it is, the photo lacks interest.