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One of my many little sisters. (the only one that will bloody pose)

All taken in my living room today.

All c&c's welcome - If you dont tell me I wont learn.

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My favorite is number three. I like the poses. In your living room? What kind of lighting so you use?
I just applied to be on your forum as KathiR :)
 
I like that one too, only thing is, you can tell where Ive tried to photoshop her baggy eyes.
 
Sorry forgot the lighting question.....
ive got 2 interfit stellar 300's, one with a reflective umbrella and one with a diffuser. I have to move all my furniture out of my living room to set up the backdrops and everything at the mo so its a bit of a pain in the bum.
 
I bet it is fun to work with your little sister! I think #3 is my favorite. The saggy/wrinkled backdrop bothers me in most of the others.
 
yeah shes a giggle, she's the only person i can really practice on. No1 else will pose for me
 
Love the pose in #4! Looks really natural & relaxed.

Is it my screen but in #1 her palm at the base of her fingers seems very bright & #3 her top is too? I don't think you needed to PS around her eyes as they seem unique & draw the viewers attention in. (Do you still have/can you post the original with the "bags"?

On #3 also you could use a colour filter to minimise skin blemishes & freckles (yellow I think?) Maybe could be applied in PS but I'm not too sure how.

Overall a good, natural and pretty model & some great poses!
 
I like the 1st one the best, the pose is the best in that shot I think.
 
I like these, I think they're very good.
# 5 is my favorite!

Only a couple things I noticed though....
# 1 - What's going on in the top left corner? Looks like you missed your backdrop.
# 4 - I like the pose, but she's leaning too much on her right arm. Doing so makes her upper arm look much larger than it really is.
 
Hey, good job! I like #3 the best mostly because the focus seems best around the eyes and face. I do like the poses in the others too.

I, also, registered on your forum. See you there.:thumbup:
 
Only one I had any problem with was number one.. the crop was a little funky but otherwise I like them all. I would have chopped off the lower half of the image.
 
Nice work, I really liked #3 till you mentioned the PS'd under eyes. I didn't notice them till you mentioned it, which means a little more tweaking would do it.

Now to return the favour bribe her with a nice lunch so she'll keep posing :D
 

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