Smoke

[jake337]

 

[jake337]

I'm definitely going to be shooting in my garage again.

 

[jake337]

Any thoughts?

 

[JustJazzie]

The light is interesting, the smoke is interesting, but I can't really tell what the person is doing/feeling/thinking, so it falls a little flat for me in the end.

 

[jake337]

The light is interesting, the smoke is interesting, but I can't really tell what the person is doing/feeling/thinking, so it falls a little flat for me in the end.

Thanks for the feedback. Very much appreciated.

 

[Kev Richards]

I kind of get what JustJazzie is saying, but imo I like not knowing what they are doing. It's kind of mysterious. It gets you thinking and your imagination working.
Great shot

 

[jake337]

I kind of get what JustJazzie is saying, but imo I like not knowing what they are doing. It's kind of mysterious. It gets you thinking and your imagination working.
Great shot

Thanks for the input.

 

[Gary A.]

Wonderful use of light and shadows. Unfortunately, that's about the only story I immediately grasp from the image. I need a little more face ... maybe a profile in light to bring the potential to reality.

 

[jake337]

Wonderful use of light and shadows. Unfortunately, that's about the only story I immediately grasp from the image. I need a little more face ... maybe a profile in light to bring the potential to reality.

Thanks for the critique.