Smokey. (NSWF)

RMThompson

the TPF moderators rock my world!
Joined
Nov 12, 2006
Messages
1,888
Reaction score
11
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
Some more experimentin'

1.

3389247624_20928cacf5_o.jpg


2.

3388403961_c353ac256d_o.jpg
 

twozero

TPF Noob!
Joined
Sep 10, 2008
Messages
173
Reaction score
0
Location
East TN
Website
coreymc.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
i like them both a lot conceptually. the first one just seems odd because of the crop on the body. the second one is great though!
 

iflynething

TPF Noob!
Joined
Oct 26, 2006
Messages
1,346
Reaction score
0
Location
South Carolina USA
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
WOW. I actually said WOW outloud...


That's all Ihave for you. They are wonderful

~Michael~
 

Bigpopa

TPF Noob!
Joined
May 25, 2008
Messages
297
Reaction score
0
Location
Golden,Co
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
Those are some really cool shots very artistic....
 

ValDR

TPF Noob!
Joined
Mar 10, 2009
Messages
216
Reaction score
0
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
The second one is just great. Definetly one of my all time favourites.

Also the first one is good. but the position of the body is strange to me: changes to abruptly the direction of the smoke.
 

250Gimp

TPF Noob!
Joined
Oct 3, 2006
Messages
1,031
Reaction score
0
Location
Chelsea, Quebec
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
#2 is great! Well done!

#1 just doesn't work for me. I guess feel th smoke should come from the upper body, but thats just me.
 

Big Mike

I am Big, I am Mike
Staff member
Supporting Member
Joined
Dec 16, 2003
Messages
33,896
Reaction score
1,853
Location
Edmonton
Website
www.mikehodson.ca
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
It would be nice if I could see the whole image on my monitor...and not have to scroll. Think it lessens the effect.
 
OP
R

RMThompson

the TPF moderators rock my world!
Joined
Nov 12, 2006
Messages
1,888
Reaction score
11
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
It would be nice if I could see the whole image on my monitor...and not have to scroll. Think it lessens the effect.

I TOTALLY agree on this, and I am thinking of a better way to crop the first one.
 

SrBiscuit

TPF Noob!
Joined
Apr 22, 2008
Messages
2,716
Reaction score
44
Location
NH
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
i like the concept a lot...very cool idea.

the transition from body to smoke does seem slightly harsh, so the only thing i might work on on these is to weave the smoke and bodies together less definitively.

great idea though!:D
 

Judge Sharpe

TPF Noob!
Joined
Feb 13, 2008
Messages
307
Reaction score
0
Location
birmingham alabama usa
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
On Firefox, at least, if you right click the image and click "View Image" it will load the image alone in the window, resizing to fit the screen if necessary. Granted, you will lose some IQ from the browser resizing, but at least you can get the effect of the image.

These are nice attempts. The second works much better than the first I think. I think it would be even more successful of you could smudge the smoke into the skin a bit where they overlap. Nice job though! :thumbup:


I too would like to see the whole thing but once again the right side margin ads block aout 1/3 if the image and I can not find a way to get them off the image. Oh well.
Judge Sharpe
 

woojiebear

TPF Noob!
Joined
Mar 20, 2009
Messages
387
Reaction score
1
Location
Kelowna, B.C.
Can others edit my Photos
Photos OK to edit
i love love loveeeee the second one!!!
HOT!!! and fading into the smoke?! so creative and such a smooth transition.
nice effing work! :)
 

Josh66

Been spending a lot of time on here!
Joined
Oct 31, 2007
Messages
14,593
Reaction score
1,238
Location
Cedar Hill, Texas
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
Not sure about the first one, but the second one rocks!
 

MyaLover

TPF Noob!
Joined
Nov 13, 2007
Messages
876
Reaction score
0
Location
Here and There
Website
www.flickr.com
Can others edit my Photos
Photos NOT OK to edit
IN.LOVE. I think they are fantastic. this is my favorite type of stuff from you. The other portraits are nice, but your artistic photos are where you excel. I did something VERY similar with smoke.... great minds think alike?????? :) You blew mine away though :)
 

Most reactions

New Topics

Top